tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19161923.post4874094248081856977..comments2024-03-18T03:00:34.609-07:00Comments on Story Sensei: Show versus Tell, example fourteenCamy Tanghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14577747925320907186noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19161923.post-3989852717727983702009-07-16T08:26:37.412-07:002009-07-16T08:26:37.412-07:00very good nugget, Cami! thanks. now, off to fix ...very good nugget, Cami! thanks. now, off to fix mine! ; )Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15959035032526995246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19161923.post-19500801922315348122009-07-15T21:29:18.670-07:002009-07-15T21:29:18.670-07:00Thanks so much, guys! I'm so glad this example...Thanks so much, guys! I'm so glad this example was helpful!<br />CamyCamy Tanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00790591988777275651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19161923.post-87368424753754467752009-07-15T21:25:33.884-07:002009-07-15T21:25:33.884-07:00Thanks for posting about this topic. It's eas...Thanks for posting about this topic. It's easy to lose sight of showing and easily fall into telling!CMOM Productionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04595915747223847421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19161923.post-73892245561765481302009-07-15T12:28:44.695-07:002009-07-15T12:28:44.695-07:00So helpful. I've been reading your writing art...So helpful. I've been reading your writing articles and learning a lot. Thanks for all the valuable information.Preslaysahttp://www.preslaysa.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19161923.post-24497328965075961282009-07-15T07:33:27.763-07:002009-07-15T07:33:27.763-07:00Great example! I'm reading Sushi for One right...Great example! I'm reading Sushi for One right now. I'm about halfway and boy are you the Queen at deep POV. Well done!Katie Gansherthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09150375338556869812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19161923.post-32671934215226186672009-07-15T06:14:25.210-07:002009-07-15T06:14:25.210-07:00Hi Camy,
I see the strength in the change. I'm...Hi Camy,<br />I see the strength in the change. I'm learning from your blog. Thank you!<br />~ WendyWendy Paine Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15136235074351188350noreply@blogger.com