Emotions – the words you use
Certain words tend to evoke very specific and universal emotional reactions from people.
For example, “jumped” is a rather neutral emotional word. However, “bounded” tends to denote more excited spirits in the person doing the bounding. “Stomping” tends toward anger.
Other examples:
“Protector” triggers a warmer emotional reaction when you read it than “Guardian.”
“She swept the room with a piercing eye.”
Versus
“She swept the room with a piercing glare.”
Versus
“She swept the room with an observant eye.”
Dwight Swain wrote: “Pay attention not just to words as words, but also to the feelings they mirror when people use them.”
When getting into a character’s point of view, utilize specific words to draw out your reader’s emotions. That way, they’ll feel your character’s emotions with more intensity.
For example, “jumped” is a rather neutral emotional word. However, “bounded” tends to denote more excited spirits in the person doing the bounding. “Stomping” tends toward anger.
Other examples:
“Protector” triggers a warmer emotional reaction when you read it than “Guardian.”
“She swept the room with a piercing eye.”
Versus
“She swept the room with a piercing glare.”
Versus
“She swept the room with an observant eye.”
Dwight Swain wrote: “Pay attention not just to words as words, but also to the feelings they mirror when people use them.”
When getting into a character’s point of view, utilize specific words to draw out your reader’s emotions. That way, they’ll feel your character’s emotions with more intensity.
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